Polyamorous Hell - “CreepyPasta” Review by Josh
Josh here, I wanted to give you my thoughts on this story. Full disclosure, this will probably be the first not positive review I give.
Story:
There is a town where once you turn 18 there are a few things that happen. One you get a card that has the first name of your “soulmate” and then two a series of rules. These series of rules cannot be told to anyone except people over the age of 18.
The story was an interesting one to say the least, I don’t really know why this falls under the blanket of creepy pasta. I suppose there are a few “creepy” things that you see later in the story, but I feel like it was more of a love story. Not really a whole lot to go from but wanted to share my thoughts anyways.
Spoilers and Thoughts:
This will probably be my first not negative but not positive review…
First question I asked was what happens if these rules are broken?
Answer: Seems like you go to almost like a purgatory. Town that is basically empty with no buddy but the lost ones.
Who are the lost ones?
You never really know, but one can assume it is just the people who broke the rules.
What are the rules?
We don’t really know anyone else’s but for our main character, it’s nobody who can go into public waters, river etc. No TV after 9 Pm. No faucets after 9 pm, which include sinks, showers, etc.
Who was the protagonist’s soulmate?
Someone by the name of Avery
What happens to the protagonist?
He is thrown into a public water source which causes him to be punished for it.
How does the story end?
You don’t really know, he is talking to a doctor, and that’s how it ends. I think Creep Cast was just kind of over the story so maybe there was more to it.
Final Thoughts:
I think the premise of the story was good, if it leaned more on the horror side of it. It just seemed like it became more of a love story between Avery and him.